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Monday, 11 March 2019

Motivation:
Camp Experiences


Learning Objectives:
Level 3
  • Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
  • Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.


Level 4
  • Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
  • Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
  • Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
  • Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.


Learning goals:

  • To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
  • A variety of sentence starters
  • A variety of sentence lengths
  • Edit and rework
  • Effective peer checking and feedback




Fluttering with nerves when I first saw the flying kiwi. I started to get the butterflies in my tummy because I have never been on the flying kiwi before. Flying high I felt sick like I was going to puke. All of a sudden my legs started to shake like the trees were unstable. swooping down I fell like I'm going to hit the ground.



Tugging on the rope I get really bad rope burn an it fells like my hands are going to fade away. All of a sudden I get really hot & my face went as red as beetroot as I flu up in the air. SNAP! when I got let go I felt like I would bang into the tall crispy trees.


As I hear people hitting there paddle's across the stones I was nervous about my go in the kayak and the cold water hitting my paddle and it is making me shiver.


but I am glade I did it and this will be a good memory to keep.