E-portfolio - Reading and Writing

Writing - puffer fish

The Japanese Puffer Fish

The Japanese puffer fish is found on the Japanese ocean and it lives in the bottom  of the ocean.

it does some amazing things to be noticed.

The Japanese puffer fish has very shiny scales. it looks invisible to the human eye. The puffer fish has lots of spots and it has some big eyes.

Golden sand covers the ocean floor in the water surrounding Japan. The Japanese puffer fish lives by big rocks and dusty sand. the puffer fish makes some cool designs in the water. the big ocean floor is covered by the creation of the Japanese puffer fish. Japanese puffer fish uses his fins to make designs. The Japanese puffer fish likes rough currents because it has a softer ground to make really nice designs.

The Japanese puffer fish can use their sharp fins to make designs. he uses his designs  to attract the females.

Japanese puffer fish can break sand into little tiny pieces.

The puffer fish is cool because he can make designs and I really want to see one one day.

E-Portfolio - Writing term 1

E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

Structure:

L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.

Indicators:

• Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
• Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
• Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures

Indicators:

• Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
• Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

• Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
• Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

Simple sentences - green

Compound sentences - yellow

Complex sentences - light blue

STORY:

As I was slowly walking on the plane.I saw some people putting their luggage in a hole above their seat. When I sat down and saw a koala handing out some burgers for lunch. The giraffes are also handing out some fizzy drink if I was thirsty so I took a cola. As I sat down in a commutable seat I felt very tired so went for a little thirsty so I took a cola I felt very tired so I went for a snooze for